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A single tear
Is all it takes
To break a broken heart

Faded memories
Heartstrings cling to
But no one shares

Expectations shot
Left wounded
While hope flees

A cracked smile
Mistaken for happiness
Under anguished eyes

A perfect mask
Covers the dead soul
Aches with every breath

Pained mind
Wakens deep in night
Comfort sought for lost

One only the deaf hear
And blind see

A soul relieved
With just one shot
And a pair of wings
©2008-2009 ~Syrihn
:iconsyrihn:

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A poem that popped into my head on the way home from camp. I love it when it just flows from beginning to end. :heart:

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:iconmidknightstouch:
I like, I like! I love this part:

"A cracked smile
Mistaken for happiness
Under anguished eyes

A perfect mask
Covers the dead soul
Aches with every breath"

Very deep! :)

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The heart is fragile, but the soul is eternal
:iconsyrihn:
Haha, yeah, ironically I wrote it on the car ride home from Girl's Camp in New Mexico. Not my favorite times, let me tell you..

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"Cause when you're broken and malled by regret unresolved and trampled by mistakes that fill the head.Well they say 'Better to bawl,release all the fault then to suffocate while treading through the blame.Now swallow down the pain'..."-The Whitest Light
:iconmidknightstouch:
Oh sad! I wish I could have been there and gone to camp with you! You are so much fun at those! :) I have good memories of the first year you went to girls camp when you moved over here! :D

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The heart is fragile, but the soul is eternal
:iconsyrihn:
Yeah, those girl camps were good times, not so much since I moved, unfortunately. Stake dances have lost their glimmer as well. Sad days :(

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"Cause when you're broken and malled by regret unresolved and trampled by mistakes that fill the head.Well they say 'Better to bawl,release all the fault then to suffocate while treading through the blame.Now swallow down the pain'..."-The Whitest Light
:iconmidknightstouch:
Girl, you just need to come with me to a stake dance! I still got some moves in me! If anything, I get better with time! WAHOO! :)

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The heart is fragile, but the soul is eternal
:iconsyrihn:
Haha, I would soo be there in a heartbeat. ;)

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"Cause when you're broken and malled by regret unresolved and trampled by mistakes that fill the head.Well they say 'Better to bawl,release all the fault then to suffocate while treading through the blame.Now swallow down the pain'..."-The Whitest Light

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